Revision
Give each revision pass one job
Separate big decisions from sentence-level polish.
Read the story : Give each revision pass one jobRevision.
See the draft more clearly before polishing every sentence. Give each pass a defined job, examine the structure you actually wrote, and test changes against a specific intention.
Revision
Make a reverse outline to see what your draft actually does
Label the purpose of each paragraph or scene, then compare the structure on the page with the structure you intended.
Read the story : Make a reverse outline to see what your draft actually does